After reviewing the feedback on your argument essay, identify one thing you did well and one area you need to improve. Explain what you will do differently the next time you write an AP Lang argument essay.

 One thing that I thought I did best in the essay was providing a clear thesis statement. One area that I need to improve on is that, when making claims, I need relevant evidence that supports them instead of just mentioning them.  Some things I would do differently going forward are structuring and preparing myself beforehand. Follow the directions step by step provided.  I would also want to become more familiar with commentary and evidence and think of experiences and observations that I can use. 


In class, we got our grade back for our argumentative essay and wrote a poem and made a poster for it.


When I hear poem, I think of a full paragraph that rhymes. Poems do not always have to rhyme, it can be a story with a true meaning behind it. 



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